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From: John Blackbourn <johnbillion@git.wordpress.org>
Date: Sun, 14 Dec 2014 19:59:22 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Improve text for the DFW admin pointer. Remove the
 concatenation. Props kpdesign, ianmjones.

Merges [30837] to the 4.1 branch.

See #30671.

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 wp-admin/includes/template.php | 3 +--
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/wp-admin/includes/template.php b/wp-admin/includes/template.php
index db50c89f7b..6eb15b18d3 100644
--- a/wp-admin/includes/template.php
+++ b/wp-admin/includes/template.php
@@ -2056,8 +2056,7 @@ final class WP_Internal_Pointers {
 		}
 
 		$content  = '<h3>' . __( 'Distraction Free Writing' ) . '</h3>';
-		$content .= '<p>' . __( 'Start typing, and the other elements fade away so you can focus. '
-			. 'Move your mouse out of the editor to reveal everything again.' ) . '</p>';
+		$content .= '<p>' . __( 'Enable distraction-free writing mode, and everything surrounding the editor will fade away when you start typing. Move your mouse out of the editor to reveal everything again.' ) . '</p>';
 
 		if ( is_rtl() ) {
 			$position = array( 'edge' => 'left', 'align' => 'center', 'my' => 'left+40 top-11', 'at' => 'left top' );